Seriously, what the hell was that?
Every aspect of this submission was off.
Pretty epic Ambient piece.
I rather like it, despite it's repetitiveness, but as you said, it was designed for a video game, so I guess its okay for it to be like that.
I can't see/hear any problems with this piece, so good job.
The piano is so goooood.
I rather like the piano used in this song, whether it be recorded or created on the computer, it's the type my collection lacks. >_<
But yeah, it's a pretty good piece actually, a bit repetitive at times, but yeah, I like it.
Now lets counter those 0-bombers.
It's recorded on a grand piano. Not mine, but a studios. haha!
Yes, very repetitive! It has lyrics, but I was too afraid to sing x.x
thank you for the comment. :)
Not bad actually, feels like a Dance song to me.
But I think the kick at the start needs a bit more bass, as it sounds empty, the clap (Or is that a snare), that comes in at 0:12 is good.
The sounds at 0:25 just make the whole thing sound a bit, weird. They are good in their own way, but at the same time, they come in too sudden.
The melody is pretty good, and thats everything I see to review on. Good job.
Also, I rather like the piano bit, it sounds pretty neato. :)
Thanks for the review! :D
At first, I was wondering why this was in Dance, then I realised later on.
Anyways, I rather like that synth at 0:49, but it just doesn't blend in with the fact that you have pianos going, and so forth.
The kick at 1:15 isnt very good sorry, it sounds like a kick placed underwater. The melody at that time is good though, and that is why it is a Dance song I presume.
Well, thats all the flaws I see with it, keep making music dood. :)
Everyone seems to have a complaint about the synths. :P
I'm confused about your comment about the kick- it sounds clear enough to me...
Well anyways, thanks for reviewing! :D
Although this is not the genre of music I like, it's pretty dammed good.
I think the opening kick just needs to be changed, it just doesn't blend in with the start, or just change the start chords.
Or whatever, you get the point.
Nice job man.
Yes.. Maybe Ill change it.. Or Maybe not.. xD
Thanks For review :]
It sounded like gore.
It sounded like chickens getting splattered against a wall.
Not tranquil, or interesting, just disturbing.
Try changing some of the sounds, some of the melodies were okay, but just. Urghh.
It was glass breaking, but okay, chickens work too.
I'm sorry, I just like that shattering sound. It's the next best thing to actually having something to break. :P
Intro sounds a bit dull.
Intro is a bit boring compared to the rest of the song, but apart from that.
Congratz on the Top 5!
The melody is great and all, very sweet.
But the drums need some fixing, they sound MIDI or just plain off.
hmmmm I'll work on them and see what I can do thanks for the review though!!!
That was pretty bloody awesome.
Very catchy tune as well.
The intro just needs a bit of variation.
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